Final draft evaluation

Evaluation for Final Magazine

Final magazine

Front Cover

Contents

Double page spread

magazine

improvements

On my contents page i have decided to put the title at the top of the page because this is a convention that is used in most magazines, i have also decided to add more pages to my magazine and so on the contents page i have gone up to 80 pages instead of 18, also i have changed the fonts that i have used so that they are not all the same throughout the magazine and the different fonts will attract the readers attention. i have included 3 pictures on my contents a main image of Millie Pope who is my artist and two others that link to the pages within the magazine.

improvements

I have changed the font that i am using on the contents page so that i am using different typeface throughout the magazine, i have also made the coverlines on the contents page go in boxes at the bottom.

improvements

For my double page spread i have changed the colour of the background and have changed it to white,  so that the text stands out more and is clearer.

i am also going to change the images that i am going to use on the double page spread so that they are clearer and well thought out.

improvements on magazine

To improve my cover page i will use different typography on my coverline so that they stand out and i don't use the same font throughout my magazine,i will also change the photo that is on my cover so that i can use clearer images and the model will have more of a pose. i will try and make my magazine look less like a school magazine by playing with different conventions such as the type face and make the cover of my magazine flow more rather that it all be boxed in. also on my cover i will make the background a block colour and still to 3 colours in the colour palette.

To improve the contents page on my magazine i will use different fonts to that it does not look repetitive and i will also play with the way the text has been layed out and i will feather the edge of my photos to make the, look more professional and clearer.

To improve the double page spread i will use different photos and focus more on including my model and using better lighting and i will use different font.